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Submitted: March 27, 2011
Image Size: 1.8 MB
Resolution: 1800×1200

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed:1/250 second
Aperture:F/5.0
Focal Length:210 mm
ISO Speed:200
Date Taken:May 8, 2010, 5:52:13 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
Sensor Size:10mm

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Yellow Riverby *AlexisDecay13

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Critique by `TwiggyTeeluck Jun 30, 2011, 9:51:07 AM

I think you have a great start, but there are just a couple of things that could be changed to make this photo a lot better.

The first thing I noticed was the saturation. I think it could be toned down just a bit because it seems to be a bit overbearing. This might just be my personal preference, but I'd love to see what the bed of flowers would look like had it been a bit more orange rather than green.

I feel that using the rule of thirds would benefit this photo a lot. Perhaps even cropping it to a square ratio with the model to the right would cause the image to be more pleasing to the eye.

Other than that, I think it's a great photo. You caught this at a great time of day, so your lighting is wonderful. The model and her wardrobe is pretty, and I adore that umbrella!